Once when I was 10 years old my mother and I went to visit my grandma, to provide her some food, we left my grand's ma house late because we helped her doing some cleaning in her bedroom. So there is a dark area like a little forest in the way we had to take to get our home, there is a well in the middle of the forest.
When my mom and I got close to the area we saw something white we thought it was big white bag, when we got closer we noticed it was a woman, there was a woman washing clothes at 12:00 am, she was wearing a wonderful wedding dress, when we passed by her we heard she was crying , so my mom asked me for talk to her, my mom kept walking, I was scared I got closer to her then I asked her if she was okay, she didn't answer, she just started to moan like if she was in real pain, so I got even closer and I touched her arm, it was so cold I look at her feet, she had no feet she was flying, I got frozen I was scared as hell. I could't run, speak or thinking, she did not turn her head she just stood quietly, I walked back slowly while she started to cry very hard.
when I reacted, I stared to run pretty hard and she stared to chase me when I turn to see how far she was from me, when she just disappeared. When I reached my mom she saw my skin white then she realized that someone or something scared me she asked me who scared me that much I told her the scary story, she told she was told that every night at 12:00 am a pretty woman appear washing clothes, crying, and moaning, I will never walked at midnight by that way.
that a really scary time. If it was me i would probably got a heart attack. By the way your writing was good. :)
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DeleteMiguel this is really scary story i like it, maybe i would go to that forest at 12:00 and see that girl who she look, if she chase i would not run.
ReplyDeleteIts really scary story. You didn't scare when you went closer to her. It's a real story or not.
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